Sunday, August 7, 2005
0025 Between (2) Comments
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Between each word, what happens in the mind?
what moves from hearing, seeing, through the worlds
of thought; emotion; both perhaps enjoined;
what depth of silent stillness may unfurl?
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Max Reif
07 August 2005
Well, it's a timely reminder about the purpose of all this crafting that poets discuss. Can 'between' be used with ONE item? That's my only question.
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7/19/2025 4:55:28 AM # 1.0.0
Unlike Max, I have no trouble with 'between' since it is followed by 'each word.' I am wondering whether you need silent with stillness. Seems a bit redundant. I really like this poem because you kept it both technical and mystical...both places a poet needs to be. I love this poem because it expresses exactly what I think about when I write. Thanks.(Like a road map for the reader.) Raynette