0024 There Is Here; Outside, Inside Comments

This one is a fine soliloquy. I have read it three times (out loud of course) and it sings superbly. I love the way you use your mouse - twitching and whiskers - as metaphor to share your message about there being here, inside being outside. love, Allie xxxxxxxx

How I love this! ! I can smell the air, the flowers, hear the bees buzz and the faint flow of traffic outside - and feel the sense of anticipation from the mouse that roars! The open world awaits, and we teeter on the brink - of knowledge.

Ah yes...reading Rilke can turn an ordinary thought into something extraordinary.