Hopes – that soar –
like kites in wind -
above the truth –
with wishes – twisting
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As ever I remain corrected by you. More! More! :)
Tara, the Authorised Version of the Bible has 'charity', the Revised Version has 'love' -synonymous, but alas, a worn coin...and 'caritas' implies loving care...hrrumph...
Yes, airy and hopeful, and very Dickinsonion to boot. I can almost smell the ink fresh in the notebook. Cheers, Lori
All in there but the charity M? :) - as ever.... admirations, etcetera, etcetera..... t x
superb poem great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++