Tuesday, July 11, 2006

0022 A Dickinsonian Ode To Hope Comments

Rating: 2.1

Hopes – that soar –
like kites in wind -
above the truth –
with wishes – twisting
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Michael Shepherd
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Adeeb Alfateh 12 June 2019

superb poem great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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David Gerardino 05 April 2007

looking down on present self, love this line, , , , , , ,

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As ever I remain corrected by you. More! More! :)

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Michael Shepherd 11 July 2006

Tara, the Authorised Version of the Bible has 'charity', the Revised Version has 'love' -synonymous, but alas, a worn coin...and 'caritas' implies loving care...hrrumph...

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Lori Boulard 11 July 2006

Yes, airy and hopeful, and very Dickinsonion to boot. I can almost smell the ink fresh in the notebook. Cheers, Lori

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All in there but the charity M? :) - as ever.... admirations, etcetera, etcetera..... t x

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