Monday, August 28, 2006

0020 Bliss Comments

Rating: 2.0

After that first photo-flash in mind
that signalled that there beyond where, might be
a poem waiting to be formed;
and there followed, that strange mixture in the mind
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Michael Shepherd
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Alison Cassidy 10 September 2006

Denis Joe differentiates between poetry as art and poetry as shared experience. For this reader, your poem is both. The language is clear, it reads aloud superbly, it flows with ease and the idea comes from that creative other 'beyond name and form, yet known' from which it has been so lovingly downloaded. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 August 2006

MICHAEL, , , Whats to say, except that in total focus overview, this work is in step w/ every paramount principle that establishes quality craftsmanship....You hear it all the time, but only because you are deserving of it, yet it must be reverberated within its proper echo once more: FINE WORK AS PER USUAL, MICHAEL! FRANK

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