(002) The World Comments

Extraordinary words from an extraordinary poet. Your last lines are truly poignant. 10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

'Mothers -no milk to feed, kids - live like mutes' Rachel Ann Butler

Premji, a poem with a very sad reflection of our world. One of the wonders of nature is that no matter how much we abuse, ravage, smash, her she comes back to smile with beauty once again. Human spirit is part of that nature, it usually endures what you describe to also smile again. My ideal world may not be reachable but lets keep aiming high, we have to to survive!

this poem is good. It's somehow somewhat like my poem 'To the people where freedom exists, I write'

the world is where we belong..no questions for that..this is beautiful..grace

fanastice poem its true about ur world 11+ kept it up ur derseve it people can totally relate to it i enjoy it from beginning to end

is this truly our world.... am really pained..

'I live here like a dead fish without hope, eyes wide open and heart truly broke! ' I love the above lines of this excellent poem.

crafted real well...good luck!

Great poem. This is the real world we live in. It is nice to meet an illustrious poet.

The world devoid of every good things. I appriciate it very much. can we not fill it with good things? ....10

A typical bold rendition, PREM, you could've used Elders instead of Olds, humble opinion. Gripping poem, vivid description of the present pathetic condition of life. You have such power in your word, please give us some glimmer of hope. Let the world change at least on reading these your lines. Good Work.

Very good poem i was enthralled from beginning to end. It's so easy to relate to, (unfortunately) lol and it's very honest. Great writing

a grrrrrrrrrreat poem.a simply marvelous write.10+++++++++++.thanks for sharing

The sad reality of today's world...............a curse of modernisation..........offcourse who else but love or prem would feel dejected...............good write.......10+++......

I live here like a dead fish without hope, eyes wide open and heart truly broke! But your words are not so broken but striking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! congrats Sandhya

Well expressed the inner most feelings in a poetic frame...do read my lines on 'I am hopeless'

Tragic but true.Well written!

Excellent! it might not rhyme, but it is as powerful, to the point and as true as the greatest poems I've read...great talent I must say...keep up the good work... rgrds maryam

very thoughtful indeed well done, sir