There is a secret part of me,
a part that few can see.
Like silk, it is the gentlest,
yet as strong as strong can be.
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This is so beautiful! ! What a lucky bride you have there to be valued so highly. You also have a wonderful mastery of rhythm and rhyme. I loved it!
Wow Danny. This one really touched my heart. What a beautiful tribute to your soulmate. Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant
Amazing! This poem really caught my attention. I love this! Well written Danny. best regards, joan d.h.
Wow! ! ! ! ! ! a great poem..... its silken touch slips into the heart although loaded with profundity of thought. The life and the love turn into bliss only when you become one with the other and the sense of the 'otherness' is lost. A crowning poem in poetic art and content.
ah, what a fine love song, Danny....a beautiful poem......the fortunate two of you sharing such love........ Take care and be well... Love, D.
Very nicely done. I love the rhym and flow of your poem as well as the message.
Danny, This is an outstanding piece of flowing perfection.....*10* from me All the best Jon
I have found my soulmate - - - your poem is beautiful and strikes a chord (referring to your photograph :)) - glad I came across your poems.
Some people don't believe in the concept of a 'Soulmate' ~ until they have met theirs. Thanks for sharing this beautiful write.
Aw... this is such a beautiful tribute to your soulmate. Gorgeous. HG: -) xx
I came back to this, D, because, er, I wanted to. It's bringing tears to my eyes. (I'm not one of those people who says, it's bringing tears to my eyes, when it isn't) . t x
An immortal tribute to wives who stay true! Excellent poem sir! Top marks.
You have immortalized your wife with mere words...how rare a gift that is. Written from the heart, soul, mind, body...and somewhere else I see, but cannot put a word to. Wolves pair for life...lifelong companions, mates, fierce when the need for protection of the other arises. Women and men should write these heartfelt things to each other...remind themselves of the very first 'spark'. Great job! ! xxElysabeth
A man who obviuosly appreciates the virtues ofa good wife excellent tribute sir
This is perhaps one of the most beautiful love letters I've ever read....like you're in the running with ee.cummings....'and here is the deepest secret of all~~~~~~~~' This is one loved gal. marci. :)
Beautiful Danny, two halves that make a whole, a wonderful description of everlasting love. Justine.
So beautiful.... so nicely expressed.... Your soul mate is a very lucky person..........