002-Myperfectimperfections Comments

Jasper, the upside of melancholy is that it can provide such a effective springboard for inspiration. This is a fine poem that shares it's anguish with honesty and insight. You have avoided the trap of over explanation and yet the message you send is loud and clear. 'Little words puncture my soul' is particularly eloquent. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

yeah I sort of know this feeling.. It is always good to share your feelings with some one Jasper, .. And expressing your self through poems is a great way to release the tension.. nice write indeed.. again very touching loves shan