002 My Colours Comments

a good imagination well brought out. shan

t paint and point with those shades My pathways, to that dream land Though it slippers and slithers I feel close to life’s axis...........................wonderful imagery of art of love as when experiences instinctively across art of colors on the musky corridor sprucing the sultry dream, ingeniously wrought by the imagery and metaphors,10++, thanks for sharing

the last two lines gives immense depth

to me, feeling close to life's axis is of prime significance, sandhya....how it is achieved is quite subjective.....i mean, you reached there through colors is brilliant, dear; but, what do you find there, colors or pure clorlessness? ? ?

'Ha! A soft breeze, did magic Over my nude mind n body It blow out, my cinders And frozen those as stones of ice' these lines are very bright...poetically of class heavy weight! it appears that you have started seeing new colors in your life! ...congrats! ...10