Monday, January 19, 2009

0017.Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Im all alone
As still as a stone,
I just want to groan,
But i can't cause if i do,
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Sunset Moonshine
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Dislocated Heart 20 January 2009

I love this poem of yours.... I can relate to it very much so....

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Astrid Hardjana 19 January 2009

Well written, great expression of what that title means

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Ana Zaldivar 19 January 2009

yeap, realistic. and it's very well written. you expressed just what some of us feel in this moment, and you used precise words to describe it.10++

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Samia Gamel 19 January 2009

realistic...............................................

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