0015 The Couple On The Station Platform Comments

public places like this are just fodder for observation and poetry. another great write, Michael! Jake

This held me Michael, a clever 'thought out' write. Lovely story, left one wondering too how they ended up. Happily I hope. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

I agree with Judy Levine. I like the idea of knowing they'll make the right decision - at some point.

I like this poem very much. I like how you handle the tension in it so gently. I especially like your optimism of 'knowing' they'll make the right decision, but I can't help but to feel that they'll each live a lifetime wondering. Very nice write.

This is wonderful Michael! I think many couples (unfortunately) find themselves in this situation. What a sad point in a relationship....... Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

Tranche de vie interessante. Reminds me of a very public lover's quarrel I witnessed in the metro a long time ago where it was obvious to the onlookers that both parties still cared very much for each other. R.