0014.An Empty Girl Comments

wow that was powerfull Nice

strong as a rock. i wish i could be that way. nice work

Strong poem. I liked the feel of the words and the repetition in the versus. Great work.

i really, truley lov ereading your poem it just RoCkS! ! ! !

wow i really like this! i enjoyed reading it! it has so much imagery in it! great job! : -)

great write! i really enjoyed the read

Reads like a pounding hammer on a nail