If we could only find words for
the freedom, the unbounded energy,
the love, the joy,
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Well, not being Her, and not being Jake's poetry, I must be one of the 'whomever' class....but this whomever appreciates your fine writing very much.
In your search for a new poetic language, you express a new poetic language in the search. This is beautiful... love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Jesus. why don't you get a life old man, instead of living it vicariously thru the youth.
if only we could say whatever we feel in the way we want to say it without concern of audience.. i loved this michael, it rings little bells in my pocket... ~kelly