Monday, September 26, 2005

0012 Bereavement Comments

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What is it, when we mourn and grieve and cry
for those we loved - and love - now passed away,
that gives our pain such brute totality?
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Michael Shepherd
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Christian Eliab Ratnam 10 October 2005

WOW! Michael you did an excellent job on this. You put grief in so spectacular a form. I really liked it. I will ponder on this the next time I grief.

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 26 September 2005

Excellent poem, Michael. Loved this one. Liked 'our faces sometimes radiant in grief' in particular. Sometimes we do enjoy the pain. Thank you.

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John Kay 26 September 2005

I know this pain too, my friend. A broken heart gives the heart a voice.

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Michael Shepherd

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