and brought back with her
the first few primroses she did not pick
tucked neat into the hedgerow
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a snippet of pastoral life with a sort of e e cummings feel. this is definitely painted in water colour, or maybe pastel. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This is a beautifully gentle poem...from the gentle breeze to the bit of sheepwool floating about to the single dewdropp to the rabbits. It is peaceful and lovely, a memory to be treasured.
No skitty remarks for this Michael, just top marks for a thoughtful work. Danny
Charming and fairytale-like. Wonderful use of imagery - a magical piece of work. Linda