Wednesday, October 11, 2006

0010 Memory Comments

Rating: 3.0

and brought back with her

the first few primroses she did not pick
tucked neat into the hedgerow
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Michael Shepherd
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Linda Ori 24 October 2006

Charming and fairytale-like. Wonderful use of imagery - a magical piece of work. Linda

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Alison Cassidy 12 October 2006

a snippet of pastoral life with a sort of e e cummings feel. this is definitely painted in water colour, or maybe pastel. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Scarlett Treat 11 October 2006

This is a beautifully gentle poem...from the gentle breeze to the bit of sheepwool floating about to the single dewdropp to the rabbits. It is peaceful and lovely, a memory to be treasured.

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Debora Short 11 October 2006

simply beautiful! ..and going on my favorites list.

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David Gerardino 11 October 2006

Michael, one of your best.............10

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Danny Reynolds 11 October 2006

No skitty remarks for this Michael, just top marks for a thoughtful work. Danny

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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