001-So...You Told Me. Comments

Every heart that loves Will ever sing sweet song, For his failed first love His heart will play ding dong. CP

Ohh dear friend.. This is very moving, I was touched, you kept the poignant aspect through out.. Very touching and heart felt poem indeed.. sweet Allie said it all I guess.. Did tears came when you wrote this one? ... some times we poets when we write from heart tears do come... Poems are so beautiful when written from heart.. you did a good job here with lots of love shan

Poor Jasper. You describe here (with passion and energy) the agony of first love. You're not alone and please don't hate yourself. Just because you've been betrayed once, doesn't mean that all women are the same. Perhaps you've learned to hasten more slowly next time. In the meantime remember how Tennyson put it in his poem In Memoriam: 27,1850: I hold it true, whate'er befall; I feel it, when I sorrow most; 'Tis better to have loved and lost Than never to have loved at all. A passionate heart-felt poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥