Tuesday, February 25, 2014

001. My Dog Comments

Rating: 4.6

My dog running through the fields
her tongue hanging from gaping jaws
she slows to sniff a rabbit hole
nose close to the ground
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Jaden Knight
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COMMENTS
Michele Hammond 19 December 2014

: -) Love this - brought back memories - well captured imagery in a neat style.

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Claudge Ben-at 31 October 2014

This is like made of yeast. This dog is so adorable. Great poem indeed. Should you join any poet books?

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Anayssa Garcia 24 October 2014

This was such a sweet poem. I couldn't help but smile as I read it.

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Chinedu Dike 07 October 2014

I like the poem. Dogs are best of friends with their owners, very loyal and faithful. If you spell its name backwards - it's god! . No wonder. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Darlene Walsh 25 September 2014

My Black Lab is very fond on bunnies. He is very obedient, except when he sees a bunny. I'm sure he chases them in his sleep too. A beautiful poem and lovely remembrance for Fearn. Darla :)

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Abekah Emmanuel 24 September 2014

I think your dog must be very obedient. hhaaaa. Nicely written!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 17 August 2014

a soothing poem. Cute and nice

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Farina Afrin Malik 15 May 2014

It's an adorable piece of writing. Only makes me wish more I actually owned a dog.

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Gergana Teofilova 11 May 2014

Cute, cute, cute...Only one who has a dog is able to understand the feeling :)

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Evy-joy Rendon 04 May 2014

I'm laughing when I reading this, why because your dog enjoying chasing that rabbit but in suddenly you call her, and stop it.... what a dog but I know she never get in her mind that rabbit....

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Shian Daley 30 April 2014

This is so cute. I love it :)

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Susan Lacovara 12 April 2014

I am sure Fearn still romps in Heaven...Are you aware of the poem, The Rainbow Brigde, where our departed animals await us in Heaven? A nice tribute for your first written poem. I believe Fearn' s tail would be wagging in delight. PEACE

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Kanav Justa 21 March 2014

a sweet poem on dogs, , , ending gave me a smile, ,

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Jemima Rivas 26 February 2014

Sounds like you really loved this pet. this poem is really awesome thank you god write its almost like a story a beautiful story XD

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Nika Mcguin 25 February 2014

lol! this is so cute! ~ Its been so long since I've been able to have a pet, so I'll live vicariously through this poem. Another great write! ~Nika

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