My dog running through the fields
her tongue hanging from gaping jaws
she slows to sniff a rabbit hole
nose close to the ground
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This is like made of yeast. This dog is so adorable. Great poem indeed. Should you join any poet books?
This was such a sweet poem. I couldn't help but smile as I read it.
I like the poem. Dogs are best of friends with their owners, very loyal and faithful. If you spell its name backwards - it's god! . No wonder. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
My Black Lab is very fond on bunnies. He is very obedient, except when he sees a bunny. I'm sure he chases them in his sleep too. A beautiful poem and lovely remembrance for Fearn. Darla :)
I think your dog must be very obedient. hhaaaa. Nicely written!
It's an adorable piece of writing. Only makes me wish more I actually owned a dog.
Cute, cute, cute...Only one who has a dog is able to understand the feeling :)
I'm laughing when I reading this, why because your dog enjoying chasing that rabbit but in suddenly you call her, and stop it.... what a dog but I know she never get in her mind that rabbit....
I am sure Fearn still romps in Heaven...Are you aware of the poem, The Rainbow Brigde, where our departed animals await us in Heaven? A nice tribute for your first written poem. I believe Fearn' s tail would be wagging in delight. PEACE
Sounds like you really loved this pet. this poem is really awesome thank you god write its almost like a story a beautiful story XD
lol! this is so cute! ~ Its been so long since I've been able to have a pet, so I'll live vicariously through this poem. Another great write! ~Nika
: -) Love this - brought back memories - well captured imagery in a neat style.