Saturday, August 29, 2009

001 - Girl Watching Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was sitting in the park just biding my time
Trying to think of a topic for my next rhyme.
When this maiden strolled by,
Man she really looked neat
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George Hunter
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 March 2010

Lovely. That is why women were created - they add pizzazz to man's otherwise boring existence.: -) Great write Georg -enjoyed it very much.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 October 2009

lovely...has humor...mischief...a real fun to read this very natural poem

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