Sunday, December 14, 2008

001 Bird's Eye View Comments

Rating: 4.2

arm’s length away
i could see
threads on your dress
sweat on your legs
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Manonton Dalan
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Joseph Vincent Orlanda 06 April 2010

i guess unconditional love still prevails in this day and age...

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Samuel Chung 04 April 2010

Hello. nice poem! its brief, but then its also powerful! as promised, i will visit, and thank you for telling me what to do, although, sadly to say it didnt work. but anyways. good poem, and hope for more

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Mary Naylor 03 January 2009

I thought this was a beautiful and romantic poem. The imagery was lovely and original.

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*Trusting You* 23 December 2008

this has a lot of images in it. well done enjoyable piece. Crystal

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Juan Carlos Abeti 18 December 2008

inspirational and very well wtitten, great.

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Linda Winchell 17 December 2008

Very visual piece of two lovers embracing. Linda

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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