It is so beautiful, nice and round
Like a balloon you blow
Spreading light across the night
With it’s warm and golden glow
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You've surpassed many adults with your skill. I know that I've guessed correctly that you are very Proud of your skill. Good work.
Congratulations to you for writing poems in a tender age! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Best beauty, you didn't use the word, the noun even in one place and that makes the poem even more great. Angel
This is the first poem that I happened to read from you Risha! And you bowled me over! Gimme some time, I'll comment each one of your poems!
Risha this is beautiful...loved the whole poem especially the last line. Hugs, Diane
It has been a while since I have read any of your work, And this one does not dissapoint, A pleasure to read, Excellent Immagery used, Thank you for posting
Whether ink or words flow from Risha's pen? A little girl in age, but well matured in her thoughts.
You have surpassed many adults with your skills. I am guessing that you are very proud of these Skills. Good WORK Risha. Val Brooklyn Rogers