Sunday, January 27, 2008

(001) A Midnight Roamer Comments

Rating: 3.3

It is so beautiful, nice and round
Like a balloon you blow
Spreading light across the night
With it’s warm and golden glow
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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val Rogers 03 January 2016

You have surpassed many adults with your skills. I am guessing that you are very proud of these Skills. Good WORK Risha. Val Brooklyn Rogers

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val Rogers 03 January 2016

You've surpassed many adults with your skill. I know that I've guessed correctly that you are very Proud of your skill. Good work.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2014

What a poem! And she is only 12, amazingly beautiful.

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p.a. noushad 28 May 2010

very beautiful imagination, nice verses

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Shikdar Waliuzzaman 16 May 2010

Congratulations to you for writing poems in a tender age! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Pandian Angelina 11 July 2009

Best beauty, you didn't use the word, the noun even in one place and that makes the poem even more great. Angel

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Rajeev Sadasivan 27 June 2009

Rishakutty....goahead.....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 April 2009

B e a u t i f u l compostion!

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Jayan Damodaran 26 December 2008

This is the first poem that I happened to read from you Risha! And you bowled me over! Gimme some time, I'll comment each one of your poems!

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p.a. noushad 14 June 2008

nature and the realities of life.

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Diane Violet 18 February 2008

Risha this is beautiful...loved the whole poem especially the last line. Hugs, Diane

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Howard Johnson 05 February 2008

It has been a while since I have read any of your work, And this one does not dissapoint, A pleasure to read, Excellent Immagery used, Thank you for posting

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Keerthana Mohan 04 February 2008

Whether ink or words flow from Risha's pen? A little girl in age, but well matured in her thoughts.

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Indigo Christman 27 January 2008

You are ten! ? Wow...

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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