Wednesday, December 6, 2006

0007 Holding The World Comments

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and there’s this alleyway
and a passage, then a door,
ordinary, but
the pavement in front of it
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Michael Shepherd
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Robert Howard 20 December 2006

A beautiful and simple message in such a humble setting. I suspect that the sadness that some expressed in their comments is for the arrogance and violence of those who on whom the message is lost.

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The aged learned muse and the newborn instinct-driven babe holding the same much searched-for answer... had not thought of this, M, and of course you are right, as so often planting a seed of new thought. Are they, though, 'right', I wonder.. of course the question is redundant. Provoking, M; this piece is joyful but makes me feel deeply sad. Effective, then, of course. t x

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Gaurav Silwal 07 December 2006

I love this poem very much....Gaurav.

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Gaurav Silwal 07 December 2006

'it’s all, all love; and so are you '

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Tranquil Ocean 06 December 2006

Michael...How beautiful. It is...Isnt It? ? TO

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