Tuesday, August 2, 2005

0004 The World Has Lost The Ear For Rhyme Comments

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The world has lost the ear for rhyme.
It still makes children squirm with pleasure;
and from some witty pens and minds, its fireworks fizz;
so, after all these centuries of rhyme
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Michael Shepherd
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 04 August 2005

Michael, when i read poems like this i want to smash my pens and burn all my manuscripts. gotta light? Jake

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Michael Shepherd 03 August 2005

Thanks, Sherrie. I've amended the title.

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Mary Nagy 02 August 2005

Very nicely put Michael. In my opinion (which means close to nothing here :) sometimes when words are written in a certain 'musical' way they just seem more beautiful. Honestly, I don't see why anyone would say 'one way is IN and the other way is OUT'. Perhaps the loudest voices are the ones that dislike the rhyming style right now but that doesn't take away from 'personal opinion'. We like what we like. That needs no explaination or justification. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 August 2005

WOW! Michael! this is wonderful! I'm jealous...lol! This is very nice work! Congratulations. LSP

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Raynette Eitel 02 August 2005

Oh Michael, very well said...and your final stanza is the frosting on the cake. I love both kinds of poetry and wouldn't want to give up either one. Raynette

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