Sunday, October 12, 2008

0001 Punks Comments

Rating: 4.8

Not believing in anything I just sit,
listening to my breathing.
After thirty years
It still goes in and out.
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Lori Boulard
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Lori. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Sue Ann Simar 30 November 2008

It still goes in and out and on and on. Clever, satisfying poem.

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Gi Galen 12 October 2008

Interesting image, poetic 'portrait' … 'special effects'-10

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