I don't remember my first steps
As child, I tried to make;
Now, as a grown up Adult
I attempt my first 10 steps.
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An all in all inspired poem. These ten steps are the steps of life. Well done! ; D
A great theme and well written, too. Way to go... looking forward to more steps.
nice steps... with all ways at real life.... write very real...
ONENESS! I see Oneness You in Me, Me in You All are ONE! ~ The whole poetry lifts and parks emotion at a very higher level…quoted stanza is the highest in respect to Vedic spiritual aim 'Non Dualism' a.k.a. 'Monism' 'Advaita' path of Jnana… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Clicked as MPL n