00 Writing On The Window Pane Comments

Very nice.. tranquil and contemplative. Almost surreal. Poem kept my attention waiting to discover what was written... left me wanting more of your poetry. Zen

When 'A' says, 'I will come to your house.' 'B' says 'I will write it on water.' - to mean that 'A' will never come. Similarly, here in this poem, writing on the window pane on the wet surface never stays long. So, one should write on a stone, which will remain for thousands of years. Preeti has nicely used her experience in the poem to describe the scene of snow falling on the window and outside.

this one is your best...love..nalini

heart touching is all i can say. i liked it

Praise for your charming windowpane poem.Thank you for sharing. Kind regards, Sandra Fowler