To look
at your life
and not feel
you need.
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Great poem, short and simple about what you're searching for in life. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
A lovely poem of longing, your words are so beautiful. Best wishes, Andrew
I think we are all searching. A nicely written, spare poem.
yet unique repose in desire as poised by the glaze of mind, well penned, thanks for sharing
Been there lots of times but can't seem to stay in that one place... Again, a perfect poem of simplicity which, of itself, is so beautiful. : ]
Mary, Aren't we all really looking for that in life. Let us know if you find it. Hugs, Dee
Mary, If you can speak beautifully about 'that place', you know how to get there, because after all it's just a state of mind...right? You've got vision and soul...I enjoy your writing. Ray
Beautiful. I really makes you think about what you were thinking. You know? Nice work Mary! Sweetie Sarah
Aren't we all searching for that place - I like this. It's different from your usual style. avr
Good poems. Keep up the work