Gracefully sitting on a bench at the park
Listening to the music in the air
Breeze caressing her lovely hair
Delicate perfume is carried through til' dark.
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A really good poem. I liked the way it held my attention and I couldn't look away until I was finished reading it.
THAT WAS 1 OF DA BEST POEMS I'VE EVER HEARD! ! ! ! ! and that's saying something as I've read some of Doc Wilde's poems. Great work Kristin. Keep writing, Marissa
KRIS...CAN I LET GO OF THE CEILING NOW? ! TOTALLY AWESOME PIECE OF WORK...EACH STANZA RIVETING WITH, ANXIOUS DELIVERANCE...AND A THEME CLOSE TO MY HEART...THE CHALLENGE OF THE COMPETITION & THE VICTORY OVER CHALLENGE....THE ULTIMATE MIND-QUENCHING HIGH YOU ROCK-ON POETESS K.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
People aren't s'posed to wear leashes... That was my favorite part... I really loved that poem.