Saturday, August 8, 2020

दफन- प्रेम पत्र Comments

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वोजो अनगिनत प्रेम पत्र लिखे मैंने
वोआज भी दफन है मेरे सीने में
जिन्हे मै तुम्हारी यादोंका तोहफा समझ
लिए फिर रहा हूँ और ये मेरे साथ अंतिम साँसों तक रहेंगे
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2020

Letters keep emotion and message.Letters tell us many things. This is the time of technology. We rarely see personally written letters. At this time you have reflected well your thought about letters. This is an amazing poem...10

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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2020

To me this seems to be the ultimate stage in an affair cut short midway. But look at the way the lover suggests resolution of pending issues relating to love letters (or the commitments exchanged between them) . Wow! Beyond imagination. Thanks, Asim ji. I'm overwhelmed. This goes into MyPoemList.

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Varsha M 08 August 2020

Bahut khoob. Shabdon ka ye karva lejaye atteet ke un panno me jinhe ham bhi jeena cahte the magar jee na sake. Zindagi phir mauka deti hai to kyo na mai phir se hi loon usse. Bahut khoob kavita.

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