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You use good descriptive words, although they do not give understanding of what you're saying. Incomplete sentences makes it's meaning undecipherable to me. Expressions of ocean, moon, stillness are not clear to me. I think with just a little rewriting this poem will be perfect. Thank you for sharing. Will read more of your poetry as I am able. RoseAnn

A compelling and creative write. Well done my friend!

Beautiful poem. Full of musical words and powerful imagination flowing like a calm stream. I really wonder why didn't the readers still waiting to express their exclamation for this wonderful presentation. I give! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! full 10 marks for this poem.