Tuesday, August 24, 2010

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Her eyes flash like tears
From a tumbling stream.
Her hands flutter like doves
Made nervous by a changing wind.
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Nomad Omnia
forever uncertainty
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Ahmed Abomahfouz 13 September 2011

your imagery in the poem is weird, for example: it is difficult to me to imagine tears coming from tumbling stream then you liken this with her eyes flash

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Rekha Mandagere 16 March 2011

Nice sentiments fit in the frame of rhythm. Good work.

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Nomad Omnia

Nomad Omnia

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Nomad Omnia
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