On seven seas, aviation is a delight
For momentum gains and leaf rewards
Painting rainbows, smothering fireflies
Viable only through his fingertips design
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though it's unfinished... it is good... please tell me ma'am if you've finished it so that i may read more.
This is a beautiful draft I am sure it will be more beautiful when its done...
Verses in this write are good but i couldn't get what you meant by unfinished and your title too. Its out of my reach.
it is true.. a farmers day.. is never through.. one.. unplanned field...iip
Though it gives a good feeling the reader is yet to wait for the completed meaning....good aviation poem