Thursday, October 22, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

sadness
i cant feel anything
pain
have bruises all over me, crying myself to sleep
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taylor marie
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Vipins Puthooran 07 December 2011

Sadness, pain and wonder, , I could see the connection with them; ; ; A g'd poem! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 07 December 2011

Sadness, pain and wonder, , I could see the connection with them; ; ; A g'd poem! ! !

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Ronn Michael Salinas 04 February 2010

'sadness' and 'pain'. cool.

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Adam Reed 31 January 2010

dude that was awesome! love the bouncing back and forth sadness, pain, and wonder. three major emotions that only an artist can express as u did. great work! 10++

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Tai Chi Italy 22 October 2009

Very fast flowing expression of your sadness here taylor! it will end when you feel fulfilled again and if you keep writing, you will feel find your way. Life is a journey and nothing ever remains the same. Change is inevitable. Smiling at you Tai

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