Ruth:
Interesting title that. The design is different and intriguing. I did like it.
May I point out an improvement that you may want to consider. Instead of saying 'in midst' the word 'amidst' is better suited to the line.
Adelilne
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Ruth: Interesting title that. The design is different and intriguing. I did like it. May I point out an improvement that you may want to consider. Instead of saying 'in midst' the word 'amidst' is better suited to the line. Adelilne