Thursday, August 27, 2009

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Those who hold to silence; Do! Defend! :

I speak not! for the wear of words which do not mend
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Ruth L. Rivers
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Adeline Foster 10 September 2009

Ruth: Interesting title that. The design is different and intriguing. I did like it. May I point out an improvement that you may want to consider. Instead of saying 'in midst' the word 'amidst' is better suited to the line. Adelilne

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