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You stretched me like a fabric And torn my yarn apart, wonderful imagination

Wowwww I just love this poem. It is so well written and the meaning is sooo deep.

breathed uneasily in you My heart weakened from your words.. fine expressions of romance and love. thank you.

Wow! Great poetry, Bhavika. I can feel a wave of sincerity and poetic frustration in it. Thanks for your intimation.

I breathed uneasily in you 'Cause I was the ocean And you were the cyclone......the very first verses are wonderful. you are very creative dear Bhavika. this is a great gift of God. Accept it as a gift from above. When you die and go to heaven, God will ask you, . My daughter Bhavika, i gave u the great talent of creativity. What did u do with that gift. then you should be able to give him proper answer in all humility. So work hard and become a creative poetess. thank u. tony