Thursday, October 11, 2018

प्रायश्चित...! Comments

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प्रायश्चित...!

मैं इतना भी नहीं क़ाबिल कि माफ़ी आपसे मांगू
अगर तुम माफ़ कर दोगे, बड़प्पन आपका होगा...
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Devanshu Patel
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Aniruddha Pathak 20 January 2019

Sorry Devanshu, four times I entered my feedback, but PH gets an embedded page. Too bad for a gem of poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 January 2019

Now I know, Devanshu, where your excellence lies. A gem of a poem to my personal list. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 January 2019

Now I know, Devanshu, where your excellence lies. A gem of a poem back to my collection.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 January 2019

Now I know where your excellence lies Devanshu. A gem of a poem to my private collection.

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Abhipsa Panda 01 November 2018

Realization of mistake itself is great.....and asking for forgiveness detach us from our ego....A great one....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2018

Life is embraced due to mistakes but there is repentance. For mistakes there is possibility of punishment but greatness we see through value of forgiveness. An amazing and brilliant poem is beautifully penned.10

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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