Monday, January 22, 2018

आज फिर दर्द छलका: -मोहित मुक्त Comments

Rating: 5.0

आज फिर दर्द छलका।
आँख फिर आज रोयी।
प्रिये, दिल ने फिर से-
स्मृतियाँ संजोई।
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Mohit mishra
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Mohit. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2018

bahut badhiyaa...10.. dil ko sujun dene vali kavitaa

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mohit mishra 22 January 2018

thanks to you sir very much

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Binayakumar Mohanty 22 January 2018

Unparallel dear Mohit. Although it is your first poem in the sight, Frankly speaking a poem waved by feelings and imagery deemed very proper.I am overwhelmed.A big 10+++++.Plz go through my poems and comment on my page.

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mohit mishra 22 January 2018

thanks sir for your blessings.

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Mohit Mishra 22 January 2018

thanks sir for your compliments

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