आज फिर दर्द छलका।
आँख फिर आज रोयी।
प्रिये, दिल ने फिर से-
स्मृतियाँ संजोई।
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bahut badhiyaa...10.. dil ko sujun dene vali kavitaa
Unparallel dear Mohit. Although it is your first poem in the sight, Frankly speaking a poem waved by feelings and imagery deemed very proper.I am overwhelmed.A big 10+++++.Plz go through my poems and comment on my page.
A good start with a nice poem, Mohit. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.