ଘର Poem by Bharati Nayak

Hi Bharati, Please teach me Odiya. And Thank you, Sri Subas Chandra Chakra for the translation.

ଶିଶୁ ହାତରଲେଖା ପରି ଖୋଜୁ ଥିବା ଜିନିଷଟି ପାଇ ହୁଏ ସେ ଚିତ୍ର ମଧ୍ୟରେ, ......................................... ମତେ ଯାକ ଜମକରେ ବିଦାୟ ଦେଲେ ଆମ ଘର ଲୋକେ ପ୍ରସ୍ତୁତକଲି ନିଜକୁ ମୁଁ ନୂଆ ଘରଟେ ପାଇଁ.....ଏ ହ୍ରୁଦୟସ୍ପର୍ସୀ ଲେଖା ବାସ୍ତବିକ୍ ଏକ ଜୀବନ ଦର୍ଶନର କଥା. ଗୋଟିଏ ଘର ବାଲ୍ୟ ସମୟରେ କଣ ଥିଲା, ଜୌବନରେ କଣ ଅଛି, ଏବଁ ପ୍ରୌଢ଼ରେ କଣ ଥିବ? ଏ ସୁନ୍ଦର କବିତା ପାଇଁ ବିଶେଷ ଧନ୍ୟବାଦ୍. (A beautiful poem on house has been inscribed nicely on a philosophical base. Thanks for sharing.)

ଅପା, ନମସ୍କାର । ଆପଣଙ୍କ କବିତା ଘର ଏତେ ଭଲ ଲାଗିଲା ଯେ ତାଟକୁ ଅନୁବାଦ କରିଦେଲି, ଏବଂ ପୋଷ୍ଟ ବି କରି ଦେଲି. କିନ୍ତୁ କବିତା ର ମୂଳ ମଧୁରତା ଏବଂ ନିଚ୍ଛକତା ଫୁଟାଇ ପାରିଲିନି, କାରଣ ଧାଡି ଧାଡି ଅନୁବାଦ କରିବା ର ଟାଲେଞ୍ଦ ଥିଲା । Thank you for posting the poem in the original text, it's so appealing. You have described it with so much elegance and perfection that it took me way back to my own childhood too. 10+++++ Regards. Subhas ଏହୱପୋେ

I have gone through the odia version of the poem and its transcreation by Subhas ch Chakra.Both are equally appealing.Thanks for sharing mam.

ହେଲେ, ଯେବେ ମୁଁ ପର ହେଲି ଘର କାନ୍ଥରେ ନୂଆ ରଙ୍ଗ ଚଢି ଗଲା this poem is very nice and this poem is best of poem hunter 10++++++

Hey! What is happening! An Odiya brotherhood? With Bharati, Mahakul Sahab, Subhasji, and now we have Ms Mayurakshi Ojha joining you. All of us who do not read Odiya also should join hands and protest. Will SW take the lead? Hehehe! ! ! !

I went to Sri Subas Chandra Chakra to read a translation but could not find it. I shall just add my pleas to the rest of them here for translations of your poems. I realize it would be difficult to get the same rhythm and texture as the original w/o incredible output of time and energy.... sigh.... but I shall look for poems you have written in English that I haven't read yet. Cuz I love your poetic voice.

I am sure it is a beautiful write, I hope someday you will post the translation as well. take care