Tuesday, October 10, 2017

'दिल अपना सच्चा बच्चा' Comments

Rating: 5.0

कुछ लोग मुहब्बत में जज्बात छुपा लेते हैं
घुट-घुट कर जीते हैं और दिल को सजा देते हैं,
दिल अपना सच्चा-बच्चा, हमे खेल नहीं ये आता
हमने जिसको है चाहा, सब खुलके बता देते है ।
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Ravi The Love Poet
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Ravi Prakash 10 October 2017

Excellent expression................

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Rajnish Manga 10 October 2017

बहुत सुंदर. भावनाओं की श्रेष्ठ व स्पष्ट अभिव्यक्ति. धन्यवाद.

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Ravi Prakash 11 October 2017

Very very Thanks Rajnish ji for your compliments.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

This is so sad to punish heart hiding love's feelings. Some hide many, many waves of sea behind their minds. But love rises like powerful sun and this does not obey the obstacles of cyclone or storm. Love expresses itself and shines with new hope. Brilliant poem is powerfully presented. This is very amazing...Rating 10/10...Wishing you all the best for your poetic journey. Welcome to PoemHunter.

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Ravi Prakash 11 October 2017

Excellent analysis. Your magical words always encourage me to write better and better.

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