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it is time for you to compose more and more poems. this poem is really outstanding. you are deserving 100 -100% points. best job. you are always safe

Fear n awareness of untimely death, still an expectation from some one to hold on n save when you lose your everything..thought provoking n nice write..

I hope that writing this poem saved you from yourself- well done.

i like the rhythm of this poem, beautiful.

I'm beginning to see the recurring theme of remorse and heartache, while it is indeed a timeless theme to set a poem, it makes an even better way to ascertain the values and personal truths of the writer in question. in short the poem can help define the writer Deep, dark, original, fantastic in everyway

nicely written lvely to read....thanks

very honest questoins of a love, good write beauty, i like it.