कल रात जब मैं सो रहा था ~ Comments

It is a strong observative poem written by the poet and excellent translation by you Asimji, thanks for sharing.

The poet has made very strong observations, part reality and part fancied, aimed at removing certain weaknesses and making life more worthy of living. As translator you have succeeded in transporting the essence of the original poem as much as was possible. Loved reading it. Thanks a lot for sharing, Mohd. Asim ji.

I must read the original in english as well, This is fantastic poem and I appreciate they way you translated it.