Friday, January 18, 2008

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Can you hear the gentle trickling of a nearby stream?
Does it make you long to be that free?
Can you feel it's beautiful cool as it runs through your toes?
Do you dream of submerging yourself in it away from the intense heat i feel flowing beneath your skin?
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Laura Cummings
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Pablo Davis 08 February 2008

Glad to see the poetry is still going strong Laura, this really is very good!

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This poem really builds from a trickle to a proclamation. It's images really seep in as you read it and see yourself in this vivid image as a lover is seduced. Peace, L&T

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Laura Cummings

Laura Cummings

Alexander Hospital, Redditch.
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