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दो-गज ज़मीन पर दुनियॉ खड़ी Comments

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इक दिया है ज़िंदगी
कभी ज़ल रही!
कभी ढल रही!
कभी चरम की रौशनी
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2016

A great philosophical poem so nicely presented. Many thanks dear Ajay keep the ball rolling.

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 28 August 2016

thanks sir for your marvellous comment...

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Partha Pratim Goswami 26 August 2016

कहीं आसमान उंचा उठा कहीं ज़मीन थोड़ी कम परी! How much land does a man need? Is it merely needed to burn or bury him dead? दुनिया की रौनक दुनियॉ में रही! अब दो-गज ज़मीन पर दुनियॉ खड़ी It is not only the question of land but also that of respect, legacy and wealth.We can not carry it eternal then why to hanker after them.A great poem, Thank you...

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 27 August 2016

thx 4 ur nice cmt......

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Kavita Singh 26 August 2016

kaun ha yaha jise milti mukamal zindagi very nice

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 26 August 2016

thanks for your nice comment...

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