Wednesday, April 27, 2016

वेश्या... Comments

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हर रात मैं,
अपने जिस्म को सजाती, संवारती हूँ..
फिर तलाशती हैं आँखें,
एक दूसरे जिस्म को..
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pratima singh
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Kishore Kumar Das 28 April 2016

what a heart-touching poem u have composed on the most burning topic of our society.......let it flush this social evil..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 April 2016

Every night I decorate my body, dressing.. I can seek eyes again, to another body.. .. which is my body crumpled on the bed with a few coins in.. He wrapped meat on my bones shape tries to give. and loses herself.. .. somewhere in those folds , while the Spirit is to walk in.. all night.. not her body like a habit for all.. she is surprised every night.. Wow..nice debut poem. Welcome to our world of poetry dear poetess.. You have infinite potential and possibilities. Upkeep the habit of writing at a regular basis. This is what we learn from a prostitute. Abadhoot in Srimad Bhagavar had one of his Gurus as a prostitute too.A very serious theme to choose in a debut attempt. Thank you for sharing the poem.10 for it.

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