Monday, December 14, 2015

Το Ροδο Και Το Μελισσακι Comments

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Αχ! να 'σουνα άνθος εύοσμο, στον κήπο μου φεγγάρι
αρσενικό μου εύμορφο, να 'ρθείς και να με πάρεις!
Ωσάν σταθείς στη γης μου ευθύς σαν άξιος νοικοκύρης
γλυκά τα λόγια σου ν' ανθούν, προτού να μ' αγκαλιάσεις
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Georgios Venetopoulos 05 March 2016

An exceptional Iambic decapentasyllabic verse! The poem follows a perfect meter (15 syllables per line) , it is romantic and sentimental! Congratulations on the perfect poetic result!

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Valia Maistrou 05 March 2016

...when a Poet of Excellence like you dear Georgios declares congratulations to me, my most beloved of my new era poem flies happy upon the air! my perfect poem, as you called it, simply follows an unexpected and unique Poet's perfect feeling, so uplifting that only Iamvic meter could convey!

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Valia Maistrou

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