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Saturday, December 12, 2015

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Στο μονοπάτι για το ύψωμα βαδίζω
Είναι απότομο, μου κόβει την πνοή
Κοιτώ μπροστά, το φως να δυναμώνει
Κοιτάω πίσω, των βημάτων την ροή
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Dimitrios Galanis 21 December 2015

Μπορεί να γίνει πολύ καλλίτερο.//τη ροή//με δροσίζ' η ροή//να μη χαθεί//παρταλιάσει=να αντικατασταθεί//στο καθένα προχωρεί=ασαφές νόημα, να τροποποιηθεί.Πολύ καλό ως προς τη σύλληψη της κεντρικής ιδέας.

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Sofia Kioroglou 13 December 2015

Υπέροχη δουλειά! Μου άρεσε πολύ!

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