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Thursday, November 26, 2015

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Έγδαρες όλα τα πετσιά σου
Θέλοντας την τελειότητά σου
Αμέλησες την ανθρωπιά σου
Λύσε και λίγο τα λουριά σου
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Lionara S.t.m.o.l

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Dimitrios Galanis 21 December 2015

Καλλίτερα να διαγράψεις την πρώτη στροφή.Υφολογικά το λεξιλόγιό της δεν ταιριάζει με το ήθος των υπόλοιπων στροφών.Αν το ξαναδουλέψεις το υπόλοιπο, μπορεί να γίνει υπέροχο.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 03 December 2015

Ωραίο είναι και μπράβο σου για την καλή προσπάθεια.

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Sofia Kioroglou 27 November 2015

Υπέροχο πραγματικά! Πολύ ωραία δουλειά!

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