Hi, my name is Nate, and I am a lover of poetry and poetic feedback and suggestions. Furthermore, I think good poets are usually the ones who are always open to feedback and are always looking for ways to improve their writing, style, and form. And so please leave as much feedback as you can through comments and messages since I really appreciate them and truly desire to be a good poet too. And to my fellow poets and the community, thank you for the many unique and beautiful poems, and for existing and being open-minded too.
This experience that we call life,
is a little too complex to end with death;
A cycle of forgotten rebirths,
we flow purposefully with time.
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Who will befriend me an infinite years from now,
if I were to descend from heaven with no
knowledge and memories of my past lives once
again? Will I be cast aside, and sentenced
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I stole my smile
with my own negative thoughts,
I tricked my eyes
with my own false images,
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