I would greatly appreciate any criticism and advice on my writing techniques as I am intending to become a successful writer when the time comes.
I am a very opinionated young lady and have every intention of having my views heard. I am not one who can be silenced easily. If something can create an issue amongst the people, it cannot be ignored. Ignoring a problem does not make it disappear, it makes it thicken.
I write to express both my emotions and my views, I wish to be discovered. But as they say... If you want something done, do it yourself.
The sky is collapsing ahead of me
As we march toward our doom.
These will be the last steps I ever take
As darkness falls amongst us.
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She lies, broken in her own despair.
Waiting, for the angels to carry her away.
''Why does this hurt cry down on me? ''
Her sobs fall and sink into the deep dark soil beneath her.
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'I have a dream! ' Were the words which fell from his lips.
'I have a dream! ' Were the words which collided with mine.
'Of a land, strong but small!
Of a country where children grow tall'
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The stars shine deep into my eyes,
As I stand on my own two feet.
These will be the first steps I ever take
As sunlight climbs over the snow covered mountains.
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