I'm 16 and I live in a smallish town in Missouri. I don't think I'm very good at poetry but other people say I'm good. I don't ryme my words a lot but that is just how I write. I love to read and be outside. My favorite thing to do is walk when it is nice (not too hot, not too cold) . I'm a junior in high school and I get pretty good grades. Please comment on my poems. Thanks!
I feel so alone,
locked up in my mind.
No one can find me here,
but no one has even tried.
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This is also originally a song I wrote.
I'm lookin' around.
I'm not sure whats going on with me.
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I thought I was alone,
I thought no one cared.
Then I realized you were by my side.
You had always been there
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I welcome the darkness,
I'll take it as it comes.
It swallows me up whole,
and helps me understand better.
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