my name is Toufik born in Rabat, Morocco
I'm not writer even poet, cause the truth i can't be good in English it's not my first language i try to write correctly what i feel i Know maybe i can't tell you i'm good writer but i have feeling like you and you like all of us because we are human been so i hope you will enjoy reading my poem and why-not feel what i feel that will be great
give me your opinion because i trust in you
share with me your feeling when you read what i feel
that's all we need and that exactly the meaning of been my friend
Sincerely Toufik
Some mechanical changes that do not change the intent of the poem.
proposed and corrected by my dear friend C Cruz
So far away from you
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You....my single love
You.... my best of
I imagine you when i move
Cause without you i’m done
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Believe me, I run from dying
I know, it's so dumb, but funny trying
WAR, around me everywhere
SOLDIERS, killing everyday, I swear.
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