You think I don't care 
What you say to me 
You thing I am a hideous thing 
I  crawl in the night and cut your heart
        
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        I am untamable
My life is so tangled
They tell me their problems
Don't they now I have my own
        
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        When i sit in my little chair
with a book in my hand
I venture in to worlds untold to man
to secret gardens with unbelievable secrets.
        
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        I feel the pain as if I breath it
I feel the tingle as if i'm in need of it
His voice is deep
His arms is warm
        
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        When I imagine myself as an adult 
I see sucsses
I see a dream that becomes a reality
Nothing can ever stop me
        
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I am a writer. My friends like my poems but i wanted to put it to the test and see what other people think. :))
                    Hate
                    
                    You think I don't care 
What you say to me 
You thing I am a hideous thing 
I  crawl in the night and cut your heart 
As mine slowly bleeds
I pour myself out and let you read the hurt
That I feel inside
I want no help 
I need no one 
Because obviously you don't care
I hope that you see what you've done to me 
I hate my life and I hate you!